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Dungeon

Locked in with darkness all around
I flinch at every sound
Holding myself tight
To keep out the fright
This room is cold and wet with unmerciful winds
God,what did I do to deserve this?
What was my sin?
Suddenly I hear a man and a jingle of keys
I cry,"Let me out please!"
Then fall to the floor
The man sighs,but opens the door
Floods in beautiful light
Then out goes the darkness
Out goes my fright
©2008-2009 ~SakuraSorceress
:iconsakurasorceress:

Author's Comments

I just got a sudden burst of inspiration for this poem.Nothing I particularly based it on.
I wrote this poem September 16,2007-Sunday;7th grade.
(I'm still in 7th grade till next Friday.)
Yeah,I date all my poems.

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:iconsakurasorceress:
Gosh,I need to get someone to read this.

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And how can the world want me to change
They’re the ones they stay the same
They can't see me
But I'm still here
---'I'm Still Here' by Johnny Rzeznik
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:iconzachari:
You're very talented! Keep up the good work. I like the sense of hope this gives me. :heart: :hug:

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Zachari

---Life is a game. I win!---
:iconsakurasorceress:
Thank you!That is what I was going for when I wrote this.I wanted show that there is hope for all situations.And that everyone can be nice at the bottom of their hearts.(the guard is actually the hero in all of this.I just barely noticed that.Hmmm....This discovery is making me want to write a sequel poem.)

--
And how can the world want me to change
They’re the ones they stay the same
They can't see me
But I'm still here
---'I'm Still Here' by Johnny Rzeznik
♫.•*¨`*•♫.•´*.¸.•´*♫♫.•*¨`*•♫.•´*.¸.•´*
:iconschattenflamme:
I really like it. Keep it up. ^^

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:heart: Lord of the Rings and The legend of Zelda 4 ever!~:heart:
:iconsakurasorceress:
Thank you!I'm considering doing a sequel to 'Dungeon'.But that's if I ever just sit down and write it!I'll probably post another poem next Friday.

--
And how can the world want me to change
They’re the ones they stay the same
They can't see me
But I'm still here
---'I'm Still Here' by Johnny Rzeznik
♫.•*¨`*•♫.•´*.¸.•´*♫♫.•*¨`*•♫.•´*.¸.•´*
:iconzachari:
I'm so glad you might plan on making a sequel to this poem!

It's such a brilliant concept, to show people that there is a light in everything.

:hug:

I also think it represents that good people make mistakes, but can learn from them and sometimes redeem themselves.

--
Zachari

---Life is a game. I win!---
:iconsakurasorceress:
Thank you!!!I really hope the words come to me!I will really try!

--
And how can the world want me to change
They’re the ones they stay the same
They can't see me
But I'm still here
---'I'm Still Here' by Johnny Rzeznik
♫.•*¨`*•♫.•´*.¸.•´*♫♫.•*¨`*•♫.•´*.¸.•´*
:iconspazzmonkey37:
i no that feeling....happens all the time just when i get out of school!

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:iconsakurasorceress:
In the same boat sister.

--
And how can the world want me to change
They’re the ones they stay the same
They can't see me
But I'm still here
---'I'm Still Here' by Johnny Rzeznik
♫.•*¨`*•♫.•´*.¸.•´*♫♫.•*¨`*•♫.•´*.¸.•´*
:iconspazzmonkey37:
lol

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Requests=> open
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