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Rukia ran to the school bathroom to puke.She played the scene of a few minute's ago in her head .

(A Few Minutes Ago)
She walked up the steps to the roof.Not feeling well at all.Rukia sat down next to Ichigo.After a while,Ichigo noticed she wasn't eating,"What's the matter with ya Rukia?" "Oh,nothing.I'm just feeling a bit sick."As if on cue,Rukia's  insides began to churn.She began to run to the bathroom.As she left,Rukia heard Tatsuki call out,"You didn't get her her pregnant did ya Ichigo?"She didn't have to be there to know that Ichigo was scowling.

'Could that be why I feel so crappy?'thought Rukia.After she was done throwing up,she began to walk back.'No!No!No!Never!.....But could I?'
Well I've had this idea for a while.I read a lot of fan fictions and well,I thought it was time I wrote some for myself.Tell me if I should continue this please.I'm very curious to hear what you people think.Oh and,if I choose to run with this story,my writing will be better.Not half-ass quick like this.Hope you like!BTW,if I do continue to write this,I might put IshiHime in there.
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Scarease Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
As hat and clog goods i think i gave Rukia wrong Model Naa what could go wrong.
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tophytoph-toph12 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
C-O-N-T-I-N-U-E!!!!!!!!!!!!! P-L-E-A-S-E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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91KuchikiRukia Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2010
I'm curious now...

I wanna see the rest o.o
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overide2008 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
love it please continue it!!!^^
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KB15 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2009
Very nice! Please Continue!
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Angel-Kazekage Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2009
Could she? :giggle:
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Kooky-San Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wright more!!!
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Dragonballgirl12 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009
I love it!!!
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Zensilia Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2009
I really love this!!
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pyrogirlbl Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue. It may give me ideas for a story like this. I'm now inspired to write one.
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
awesome.
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pyrogirlbl Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
So, are you going to continue?
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
trying
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pyrogirlbl Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
Cool. I hope you do. I'm looking forward to it.
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
thanks
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pyrogirlbl Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2008
You're welcome.
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Zachari Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2008
I don't know any of the characters. :( If you continue it, can you include descriptions of the characters? :D
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2008
Maybe I can.I'd have to work on that.
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AngelQueen13 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2008  Student Digital Artist
I really hope that you will continue! This seems 2 have a really interesting plot! & some Ishihime would b greatly appreciated. *hint hint* ;)
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2008
Thank you!I'm trying.I think I could work in some IshiHime. ;)
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AngelQueen13 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2008  Student Digital Artist
yay! You're the best! :hug: I'll be keeping an eye out 4 your next chapter!
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2008
THANKS!
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lightninja21 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2008
aside from Asagi-K-Kurosaki consider this your first constructive criticism, like you said you half assed this, it's not a story but a rough idea, you didn't have to worry about anyone seeming OC because you put themm in a generic posistion in which you can enter any number of charaters. like change ichigo to naruto, ruika to hinata, and Tatsuki into sakura, and guess what you got? a naruto fic with a just preggo hinata :p .

if you want to realy make this story good you need to get inside each charaters head, you can put it any settings you want but, make sure the charaters act like they would if this happend in the show. for example ichigo on the outside would be opposed to this but give him and rukia some alone time and he should soften up and be nice. rukia will be effected by pregnancy hormons so her being a little OC is ok :) , but for the most part she'll still drag ichigo all over the place, to where ever she wants to go (and ichigo will relunctly follow). Tatsuki will and should just be used to scare ichigo into doing what rukia wants and pop in from time to time to reinfoce that. you should also include renji, chad, inoue, and i forget what rukia's brother in law's name is but him to, and you need to get in all of there heads, give them a reason for showing up, and figure how they'll take the news :)
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2008
I love you!Thanks so much!I really needed some advice and I really,super appreciate it!!!!I was planning on including those characters(BTW,her brother's name is Byakuya).I will so take your advice!Just thank you!
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lightninja21 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2008
ya I just thought that your idea had potential to become a great story, not just something perverts who like pregnancy would read and say it's god's work because it gives them a ~censored~. sorry just had to get that out :3 if you need any help on getting into the charater's heads I think I could help and I will if you ask :3
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2008
Thank you,a lot.
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Asagi-K-Kurosaki Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008  Professional Writer
Um, ok, yes continue it but... from a writer's pov let me give ya' a couple tips, one: please have them married if she's pregnant and try to avoid a shotgun wedding because with these two it's much better to have a baby after marrige (it's complcated) and um, yes, it'd also be very wise to make sure that they AREN'T in school wen she's pregnant (send 'em to Soul Society if ya' have to (recommended)) why? Because if she's pregnant in school it will be incredably difficult to go after hollows and wat not,
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
Thank you so much!I will really remember this stuff when I'm writing.Thanks again for the advice.
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Animeluverx12 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
Its good! :iconichigoplz:x:iconrukiaplz: is the best!

:iconichigoplz:x:iconorihimeplz: is the worst.
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
Thank you!Thank you!Thank you!IchiRuki is so cute!
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MufasaTheMiniMuffin Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
Finish... now!
**grr**
If you dont ill set the dogs on you! RAWR!
XD
No but seriously, this is good.
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
Thank so much!I'll try my hardest to continue writing this!!!
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MufasaTheMiniMuffin Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
^^
Mind telling me when you post it?
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
Well,I can't really give you a date.But I'm working on it.
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MufasaTheMiniMuffin Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
I know, i meant when you do finish. ^^
Ill keep an eye on you. XD
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
Glad you're very interested!I'll tell you when I'm done!
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MufasaTheMiniMuffin Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
haha. thx.
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
NP.Thank you.
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Marbleye Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
I really liked it. Please continue :please:
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
I will really work hard!Thankies!
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123troisnaruto Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
CONTINUE PLEASE
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
Really????!You think it's good?*shocked*
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123troisnaruto Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
yeah It is extremely original.
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
Thanx.Did I make her to OC?Feel free to criticize all you want.It is my first fan fic after all.
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123troisnaruto Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
not really, kind of... but don't worry you will get the hand of it
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SakuraSorceress Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008
Well that is comforting.I didn't want to make her so unlike her character.
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