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I walked to edge of the earth
I looked back and saw everything
War
Fights
Arguments
Theft
Death
All over the world
All at once
I even saw the past
Destruction that shook the world
Death that left us all empty
Horrible things that I never lived
But in that moment I did
In a small corner of the world
So small I almost missed it
I saw every painful memory of my life
Screaming at my sister about how much I hated her
Holding back tears as a kid teased me
Watching my mother cry for a brother I never knew
Seeing my once strong father close to dying in a hospital bed
Finding my dog's cold, shallow breathing body so near to death
Trying to block out the arguments of my parents shredded marriage
Crying and pounding a bathroom floor after losing my love
And the many sobbing nights after
Me finally realizing how my life was never gonna go anywhere
I couldn't look away
I cried and screamed louder and louder
Each memory cut me deeper and deeper
I relived it all
As if I never had before
And every memory was new
Fresh wounds that ripped and teared at me
I was brought to my knees
Broken
Lonely
Sobbing
I dragged myself
Slowly crawling back to the rest of world
I returned
Bruised
Scratched
Tired
And I knew why walking to the edge of the earth and back was such a big sacrifice
At the edge of earth,
You see how horrible the world really is
You see things that should never have been seen again
You feel the hurt of a million people
And you feel each and every one of their deaths
Reliving your life is the hardest
Reliving every painful moment
Breaks you in a way you never thought you would be broken
It twists your soul
Crushes your heart
Over and over
Even worse than the death of those millions of people
And yet coming back is even harder still
Knowing that you have to live in this terrible world
Knowing that you have a lifetime of pain left
You want to throw yourself off of the edge
Just to escape it
But for you,
I'd walk to the edge of the earth
And back
Again
I looked back and saw everything
War
Fights
Arguments
Theft
Death
All over the world
All at once
I even saw the past
Destruction that shook the world
Death that left us all empty
Horrible things that I never lived
But in that moment I did
In a small corner of the world
So small I almost missed it
I saw every painful memory of my life
Screaming at my sister about how much I hated her
Holding back tears as a kid teased me
Watching my mother cry for a brother I never knew
Seeing my once strong father close to dying in a hospital bed
Finding my dog's cold, shallow breathing body so near to death
Trying to block out the arguments of my parents shredded marriage
Crying and pounding a bathroom floor after losing my love
And the many sobbing nights after
Me finally realizing how my life was never gonna go anywhere
I couldn't look away
I cried and screamed louder and louder
Each memory cut me deeper and deeper
I relived it all
As if I never had before
And every memory was new
Fresh wounds that ripped and teared at me
I was brought to my knees
Broken
Lonely
Sobbing
I dragged myself
Slowly crawling back to the rest of world
I returned
Bruised
Scratched
Tired
And I knew why walking to the edge of the earth and back was such a big sacrifice
At the edge of earth,
You see how horrible the world really is
You see things that should never have been seen again
You feel the hurt of a million people
And you feel each and every one of their deaths
Reliving your life is the hardest
Reliving every painful moment
Breaks you in a way you never thought you would be broken
It twists your soul
Crushes your heart
Over and over
Even worse than the death of those millions of people
And yet coming back is even harder still
Knowing that you have to live in this terrible world
Knowing that you have a lifetime of pain left
You want to throw yourself off of the edge
Just to escape it
But for you,
I'd walk to the edge of the earth
And back
Again
Literature
Blooming
Blooming --
in the star speckled sky, or perhaps the sky-speckled stars,
they flare and spark in their determination to outshine all else.
They creep gently around the solemnly turning planets, around the Earth, marveling at us as if we are ablaze and glorious and ready to erupt, as if we
-- we, and not them --
are something to behold from a distance: beautiful, but unapproachable.
They gaze upon us, shining with a sort of intense curiosity,
and in turn, we gaze upon them in
wonderment.
But
they,
not us, are the ones that burst in sudden vehemence,
in fiery expansions that
s c a t
Literature
For You.
Oh,
The heavy weight of loss.
Literature
Do you feel the same?
I'm still just so lost
Can't believe my sadness
You shouldn't leave
What can I say?
I never felt this way
Tried to ignore it for months
I can't hide no more
Maybe it's too late?
My blush increases every second
You know I like someone
But you don't know it's you
Maybe it's true?
You make me smile
I talk happily with you
With you I feel safe and happy
Do you feel the same?
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Even with the ending I was a little depressed after reading this, mostly because of the examples used in the first large stanza having such nice imagery. However the ending completely shifted the meaning of the poem. It was already a really impassioned poem, and then the last few lines explained why you would do all that and it made it easier to identify with (instead of being an abstract idea).
I also like the different sizes and lengths of the stanzas. The lack of a pattern adds some chaos to the already chaotic imagery.
Sorry for the length, I've taken too many analytical classes.
I also like the different sizes and lengths of the stanzas. The lack of a pattern adds some chaos to the already chaotic imagery.
Sorry for the length, I've taken too many analytical classes.